Physical and Emotional Aspects of Manhood in The Red Badge of Courage by Stephen Crane
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"Each of your main body paragraphs stays nicely focused on one character from The Red Bad of Courage, and you do an excellent job with keying into what each character represents in terms of the physical/emotional aspects of manhood. However, the focus of your paper as a whole doesn't really become 100% clear until your conclusion (which should also synthesize some info about the characters/what they represent in more detail). You should ideally have an intro to set up background info and to lead into a clear thesis statement about the three characters and what they represent, including that those aspects make it easy for readers to relate to the characters. Additionally, your body paragraphs are very summary-heavy; consider adding more analysis (and even illustrative small quotes rather than so much summary to precede that analysis) that addresses how and why the characters embody certain things and bringing each body paragraph full circle to the main point about each character with a "so what?" element. Make sure that you also cite details/quotes from the book by page number based on the MLA style guide. Finally, doing a good edit to fix punctuation and grammar errors (especially run-on sentences and a few sentence fragments), to address spots with awkward phrasing/typos, and to build stronger transitions between paragraphs would improve your overall paper, too."
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