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Physical Development Evaluation of an Eight-Year-Old Girl

This paper evaluates the physical development of an eight-year-old girl.
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Jim's feedback:

"This paper is clear and well organized, but there are a few areas in which you could improve further. “Additionally … also” is redundant. The space should be deleted from “8-year- old.” More than once, the writer uses a comma splice, which is the use of a comma to separate what should be two sentences. At the end of page 1 are two incomplete sentences that should be joined into one complete sentence. “It” should be deleted from “see it fit to make sure,” but better still is to just write “make sure.” Unneeded commas can confuse, as can be seen in the very last sentence."

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