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Picture Perfect Prom is approaching and Im not ready I think to myself I havent bought my dress yet my shoes or made any appointments I dont even have a date I cant say I blame the guys around here I mumble while feeling very sorry for myself Im very predictable I do the same things every day I wake up get ready for school walk outside to my freezing cold car and scrape off the windows and head off to school I wish Dad would let me park in the garage Im the one that has to leave the house at 700 am It is more work for me though I dont think anyone really notices or cares I only see Dad about twice a week when he comes home from work earlier than normal I roll out of bed and stare at my beeping alarm clock with glowing red numbers Stretching up to the sky I think I cant be late for school anymore or the teachers will give me detention Father would not be pleased While exploring my closet the only outfit that is hanging is a white turtleneck with a green vest and dark green jeans I pull it out of the closet and hang it up next to the shower A warm shower actually seems like a good idea After Im finished with my shower I put the out-of-style turtleneck and vest on and squeeze into the size 5 jeans Im just lying to myself by thinking these things fit Id be much better off with a size 8 or 9 Maybe if Mom was still here I would have some sense of fashion I really dont know how Im supposed to dress I dont think Dad would even consider helping me out Hes too busy with his more important patients I scrape off the dirty windows of my old rusty car and begin to drive to
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