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Placing Blame for the 1935 Riot in Regina, Saskatchewan

This essay discusses the riot in Regina, Saskatchewan, during the On-to-Ottawa Trek, a protest march by disgruntled workers in Canadian relief camps in 1935, and places blame on Prime Minister R.B. Bennett.
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Jim's feedback:

"It is hard to take a conclusion from this paper because you cite no references. So, the reader has to take what you say as the truth. Moreover, the facts are inconsistent. For example, you do not spell the prime minister’s name consistently. You first say the workers were paid 20 cents per day, and later you say it was 20 cents an hour. If you want to convince the reader, you need to show consistency and cite sources for information. Your first sentence introduces a prime minister and “the riot in Regina.” This is vague, especially to readers who are not familiar with Canadian history. The introduction should clearly identify the topic of the paper. The conclusion is good."

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