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Planning an Ecommerce Website for a Clothing Brand

This is a business plan for starting an ecommerce website for a clothing brand. The student has outlined the steps of the plan, an implementation schedule, and developed a budget for the project.
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Victoria's feedback:

"Your essay is tightly focused and well organized. Your introduction clearly establishes your goals in a way that is appropriate to this type of writing, and your business plan is easy to follow. There are a few places I would love to see a bit more detail, but you've clearly thought through all of the steps of your plan. However, there are several issues. Most importantly, you seem to have quite a few repeated typos (e.g. "stuff" instead of "staff") and you seem to drop smaller words quite frequently. Your essay would benefit from some careful proofreading. Further, on page 8, you seem to lift the description of some of your selected products directly from their web pages. Even with a citation, you need to put any directly quoted material in quotes to make sure your reader understands what is and is not your work - otherwise this is plagiarism. Finally, you have a few errors in your references, specifically that your references list should be on its own page, and Harvard formatting uses "available at" instead of "retrieved from" when citing websites."

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