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It was a winter night in DecemberA wide gargantuan hole is all I rememberIt was paralleled by a flowing streamWhat an inscrutable dreamI decided to avidly search for the mysterious signThere it was Surrounded by green moldy fuzzUnder the sere treeI bent over overwhelmed to seeQuickly falling over-spiralling through the dark abyssMy hair staggering from my headI felt ascending chunks of breadAs i opened my green circular eyesI thought I had won a prizePinkvibrant arrows Treasures of all kindsSome are gold some are silver what a striking findIt felt like they will never discreteUntil I felt a bump on my pateAfter a while i became consciousWith my stomach feeling quite noxiousLarge figures like statuesCrowded around me like marshmallows around fondueWhat did they wantWhy are they staring at meTheyre filing me with humilityIt is my long black shiny hairOr is it the long floral dress I seem to wearAre they ominous or are they genialBefore they could ask me any questionsI noticed a face with many expressionsWho is that fair but short manWith a bow and arrow gripped by his right handI read about someone like him-Cupid is itI opened my mouth without any regretTo ask who he was-that man with the rosetteBut before I could he vanished out of sightWith his wings expanding-ready for flightI pushed the crowd out of the way to pursue himAfter a long and tiring chaseI saw him standing with complete graceI gripped his hand with such forceThat he started to quiver like a weak horseThere was something about him that filled me with delightHe ascended into the skyLeaving one arrow very close byThe arrow had a marking ofCCupid was the name that appealed to meI hoped he would condone me for grabbing his hand with such strengthAfter I grabbed the arrow from the groundMe laying on the bed is what I foundA dream of enchantment it wasStirred in my imagination there ofI opened my hand and found the arrowHow can
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