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Police Corruption in The Seven Five by Tiller Russell

In this informative essay, a student summarizes the documentary The Seven Five directed by Tiller Russell. The student also discusses various cases of police corruption from 2008 and 2011.
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Angela's feedback:

"You provide plenty of information that appears to come from legitimate sources, but it's unclear to the reader what the purpose of your writing is. It would be a good idea to include an introductory paragraph or at least an introductory statement to help the reader understand the scope of your work. If you're summarizing The Seven Five, then your conclusion should focus more on the documentary and less on other cases of police corruption. Your citations need to be revisited; they should be incorporated as either in-text or parenthetical citations throughout your essay instead of being placed at the end of each paragraph. Movie titles, like book titles, should be italicized, and the ordinal suffix -th (e.g., 75th) is not typically written in superscript in academic writing. A final edit is recommended to address other minor writing convention errors."

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