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Possible Solutions to Ethical Dilemmas That Businesses Face

This is a business studies paper in which the author listed two problems and suggested a number of possible solutions. The author was not only required to suggest solutions but was also asked to identify whether the solutions were legal and ethical, probably legal but unethical, or illegal and unethical. The author then had to select which solution they thought was best and explain why.
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Jenn's feedback:

"Overall, you have done a great job making the purpose of your paper clear and keeping the body of the paper consistent with that purpose. There a number of places in the paper where it feels like you repeat your ideas and message by using different words or by switching the order of the same words. Make sure to go through your paper and reduce redundancy. Occasionally, the paper lacks smooth transitions when shifting from one idea to the next. Consider including transition phrases and sentences in these places. As a reader, it feels like you elaborated on your ideas and concepts a lot more for Scenario #1 than you did Scenario #2. See if you can evenly develop the ideas for both scenarios. In regards to formatting, there are a number of places where the spacing is inconsistent. Last, there are a number of grammar and sentence structure errors scattered throughout the essay that need to be resolved to make the paper read a bit more smoothly."

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