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Practical Applications of the Botilin Toxin for Treating Disorders

This essay describes the practical uses of the toxin known as botilin. The student describes the process that scientists Ed Schantz and Eric Johnson use to extract the toxin and prepare it for treating a range of disorders.
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Bob's feedback:

"Your essay starts with a great hook and continues to be equally engaging and informative. You strike a nice balance between explaining the science behind the toxin and keeping the essay accessible to the layperson.

Make sure to proofread to address some scattered errors. In an academic paper, it is conventional to refer to your subjects by their last name rather than their first.

The first sentence of your final paragraph is a great setup for a conclusion, but the rest of the paragraph delves into details that would be better served in the body of the essay while failing to drive home your closing thoughts."

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