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Prime Minister Kevin Rudd’s Apology Speech: An Informational Essay

This informative essay provided an apology speech given by Prime Minister Kevin Rudd, along with the reason it was given, it’s reception by the people, and the effects on Indigenous people in Australia.
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Christina's feedback:

"You're off to a good start here! I like that your first two paragraphs go into the importance of the Apology speech and why people felt it was necessary as well as the history of the apology speech not being given in the past. Your paragraphs have good focus, and you do a great job getting your points across. It's clear the essay is well researched! The main thing that's holding this essay back is the number of grammar and phrasing errors throughout. For instance, the first sentence has a comma splice, and "Why" should not be capitalized in the question that follows. There are quite a few errors like this throughout. Resolving these grammar and punctuation errors would leave this essay much more polished."

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