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Pro Bono vs Commercialization: Do Higher Paid Lawyers in China Provide a Better Defense?

This is part of more extensive work. In this piece, the author discusses the ideology of socialist China, more specifically regarding legal aid. The author discusses social lawyers and salaried lawyers and how to ensure that people who need legal assistance get a good defense. The author discusses pro bono work and commercialization and how it does not align with the values of China's legal aid. On the other hand, people could think that paid lawyers may provide a better defense.
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"As this reads, I assumed that this is a portion of a larger piece of work. Because of this, it was more challenging to rate the organization of the article. I did notice that occasionally, there are transitions between topics that are not very smooth. For the most part, you have done an outstanding job with content. It does concern me that a significant amount of factual information is not followed by an in-text citation. You need to make sure to cite all information obtained from other texts to avoid plagiarism issues. In this piece, it is not clear what the overall purpose of your paper is. This may also be because this is a piece of more extensive work. Since you mentioned APA formatting, you should indent all of your paragraphs. You also need to make sure that you do not have extra spacing anywhere in your writing. Last, there are a significant number of grammar and sentence structure issues that need to be resolved. One of the main things that caught my eye is using "I" and "we" in your work. Typically, in research, you do not refer to yourself."

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