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Pros and Cons of Technology in Education

This analytical essay examines the positive and negative effects of technology in education. It looks specifically at the impact of technology on schooling during the pandemic.
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Julie's feedback:

"You have thoughtfully and thoroughly laid out the positives and negatives of the issue. Your paper is well-organized with clear topic sentences. A few points could use further explanation: Is tech addiction only from a lack of self-control? How does a shift from books help the environment? Individual sentences could be better connected, using transition words like "In addition, ..." As a final note on content, citing the experts you mention would give your paper more credibility.

Your paper does also have some word usage issues: in many cases "when" and "in which" should be used instead of "where." Please review your paper for proper punctuation: internet should be consistently capitalized or uncapitalized (either choice is ok), commas added before dependent clauses (distraction, leading to a loss of focus...), and a run-on sentence in the last paragraph (It is up to parental...) revised. Overall, your paper contains great content, but could use proofreading for usage and punctuation issues."

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