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The life I had before had taken over me I was an unmotivated child Ithought my life didnt have any type of meaning and there was nothing tolook forward to I used to be very over-weight and would rely on food asmy gateway and yet I used to be very depressed and the thoughts thatwould run through my head were all had to do with why my life the way itwas and why I cant have a life like my friends around me with a happyloving family and have everything going for them On top of that myfather is an alcoholic and every day of my life consists of a drunk on acouch with no responsibility and no love nor compassion towards hisfamily Life at home just consists of crying arguing and babysitting agrown man At the end of the day I looked at life as life as a waste oftime Later my junior year my father came up to me and said Yourenot looking so good Tom at that point later that night I just hitrock bottom and became very frustrated and angry with my father and evenmyself I questioned myself and said how did I get to this point whydid I let myself go this far I then went to bed and the next morning when I woke up the thought oflosing weight came right into my head right way the one way I can getback at my father an prove him wrong and all the anger I had towards himI used to benefit myself and it was the perfect source to help motivateme and my goal is to be better than him in every way I then forcedmyself to change and started to adjust my eating habits like the amountsI ate I started to shed the pounds and it never felt so great From theend of March to the beginning of October I officially lost over 70pounds and never felt so
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