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"It's clear that you've done a lot of research on police use of force, and it's good that you highlight some of the different tactics police officers are taught to use when dealing with unruly suspects. There are a number of changes that could be made to your work though to improve its quality as a whole. The first line of each paragraph should be indented by half an inch, and double (2.0) line spacing should be maintained within a paragraph and between all paragraphs. Your essay's formatting around the graph should be revisited so that there's not so much blank space between the paragraphs and the figure itself. You have a tendency to write run-on sentences such as the one that begins "The Supreme Court added." Generally, sentences that run three to four lines long should be reviewed and recast for clarity as necessary. When you have a parenthetical citation at the end of a statement, the period should appear after the citation. Regarding terminology, you should decide whether you want to use "Black" or "African American" and consistently stick with one of them."
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(Kibin, 2025)
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Kibin. (2025). Public perception of police use of force. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/public-perception-of-police-use-of-force-ggbooXF9
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("Public Perception of Police Use of Force.")
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"Public Perception of Police Use of Force." Kibin, 2025, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/public-perception-of-police-use-of-force-ggbooXF9
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1. "Public Perception of Police Use of Force." Kibin, 2025. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/public-perception-of-police-use-of-force-ggbooXF9.
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"Public Perception of Police Use of Force." Kibin, 2025. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/public-perception-of-police-use-of-force-ggbooXF9.
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