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Come on what are you waiting for the voice boomed in my head as I watched the maintenance vehicle go by Coming I murmured feeling embarrassed and out of place Lately I had questioned parts of our community wondering why they had to be that way Noticing my best friend Ryan still looking at me I remembered the customary response I apologize for making you wait I sullenly said I accept your apology he replied savoring the words but still without meaning Instructors in school we had taught us precision of speech but that didnt seem adequate training for a career In one more week was the Ceremony of Twelves and a profession would be chosen for me I knew I wouldnt like the career I was assigned but had no idea what I wanted Waking up from my daydreaming fast enough so Ryan didnt notice I followed him on my bike Where should we spend our volunteer hours Ryan asked me as I caught up My friends always wanted me too make decisions for them They couldnt make choices without much thought and they were always worried they might choose wrong On the other hand I looked forward to being able to make a choice even though it seemed unimportant in comparison to picking a profession Lets spend our hours today at the Rehabilitation Department I responded We biked around to the back of the building in silence as I thought again about the upcoming Ceremony of Twelves We parked out bikes in the bike ports entered the building and found the secretary Hello David where do you need help asked Ryan making sure he didnt say an unnecessary word and used precision Go down the hall and enter the first door on the left answered the secretary politely Occasionally I had worked here in the past and I knew what to do The sight of blood always made me nervous but I made
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