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Racism in Classic Disney Films

This research essay argues that Disney is racist. The student discusses why some classic Disney films are racist and examines steps that have been taken by Disney to address the issue.
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MJ's feedback:

"This is an interesting research topic, and definitely relevant considering the continued popularity of Disney films. However, your argument is often clouded by issues with writing conventions, including grammar and punctuation. For instance, the sentence that begins "In the 1940's and 1950's" is a run-on sentence that also has errors with tense and punctuation. There are numerous problems with your citations, too. Try to avoid long quotes (and if you do include them, be sure to format them correctly), and note that quotations must always be integrated into a sentence, not left to stand alone. Further, MLA requires a page number for all in-text citations, including paraphrased information. You need to check your work to ensure that the citations are correctly formatted, and also that they have been included (both in-text and in your Works Cited) for all information from external sources. Check with your school or instructor for an MLA style guide, or consult the guide available from Purdue OWL (owl.purdue.edu). Lastly, your arguments are not very cohesive. You tend to introduce points that are not clearly explained or given context, such as your comment about the producers choosing to be unlawful, or your sudden mention of pathos. For further assistance and recommendations, considering having your essay edited."

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