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I believe I should be admitted to the University of Massachusetts Dartmouth because I will be an excellent example and model for future students I can inform high school students on the criteria of the university as well as the changes they will have to make while attending college The reasons I should be accepted are as follows I am a well trained student Ever since elementary school my teachers have given me nothing but high praise for what I accomplished I respect others greatly and value their work but I give criticism when it is needed in hopes of increasing the potential of the work I strive myself to achieve greatness and would settle for nothing less While attending University of Massachusetts Dartmouth I plan on majoring in psychology The mind and how it works in various ways has always intrigued and interested me I will also maintain my grades and GPA while staying at my job and working part time With the reasons previously stated I therefore believe I should be admitted to the University of Massachusetts Dartmouth I will help make the university a better place and teach high school students the values needed to become a better person and a great student
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