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Recognizing and Addressing Food Allergies in Children

This paper stresses the importance of recognizing and addressing food allergies, especially in children. The student advocates for treatment measures, including the availability of epi-pens, to be implemented in schools.
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Bob's feedback:

"This paper has a lot of critical information about food allergies. It is organized well and largely backed up by good sources. There are a few areas where statistics are provided without a citation, however, and this should be corrected. This mostly occurs in the introduction.

Readability is impacted by a number of errors in grammar and word choice. Be sure to have the paper thoroughly proofread to improve clarity.

The conclusion could be broken up into several paragraphs. Toward the end of what is currently the conclusion, a sentence begins with "In conclusion." This would be a good place to start your final paragraph."

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