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There is a special place they all said I had to see They were all right It was the most amazing thing I had ever experienced Puerto Rico was beautiful exotic and filled with love I found it difficult to leave Very early in the morning on that final day of my vacation to Puerto Rico I had awaken to the sweet sea breeze welcoming me to another relaxing day I made the decision to collect velvet like sand and smooth shells to bring home with me I took the two-minute walk from the hotel to the beach to collect vivid memories of that vacation I have always found early morning to be free from the busy noises of life There is something about the silent echo in the morning silver sky that charms me The melody of early rising birds chirping familiar tunes combined with the rustling whispers of the sea grass that grace the lawn become my mantra as I walk down the street My bare feet step silently in tune like a pendulum that strikes each second The pace I used for the pavement changes when I enter the sandy trail that leads over the dunes to the flat surface of the beach Entering into a fragrant habitation of green I was immediately struck by the echoing silence of nature I followed the soft sandy path moving at a snails pace turning slowly I touched felt even smelled the vegetation that surrounded me captivated me with such intensity that I quickly became oblivious to the outside world My legs worked harder as I dug deeper as the swing of my free arm propelled me forward I breathed harder and harder panting as I worked
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