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Reflection on Intrinsic versus Extrinsic Motivation

In this series of questions and short answers, a student reflects on the difference between intrinsic and extrinsic motivation. The student uses examples from his own life to explain how both types of motivation have been influential in his life.
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Angela's feedback:

"You do a good job answering all the questions succinctly, but your statements themselves can be rambling since many of them are run-on sentences. Statements such as the first sentence in your work should be recast to improve the flow and clarity of your writing. A word such as "intrinsic" should not be capitalized unless it appears at the beginning of a sentence while the word "I" should always be capitalized. Your work would look neater overall if you maintained consistent formatting practices throughout the document. Thus, your answers should be indented by the same amount from the left margin, and the extra lines between your responses to the third and fourth questions should be eliminated."

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