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I felt my fear faster than I could conjure up an escape plan My dad put his hand up to protest my hundredth speech of why I felt it was necessary of him to turn around and take me back to our house I gave my dad one last sullen look and trekked through the dewy grass until two cheery and bright-eyed ladies met me They ushered me inside while welcoming me into the daylong Teen Program I sighed heavily and took my seat in the far corner of the roomSo lets begin by going around in a circle and saying our name and who were here for said one of the cheery ladies Panic began to consume me as my eyes flashed to the exit door It was barely two minutes into the program and I was already longing for the moment it was time to go I quickly scanned the other participants in the room only to find four other teenagers whom all looked a year or two younger than I The truth was they all looked like kind and friendly people only I dreaded having to share who I was and the fact that my brother was a drug addictIt was a part of my life that I liked to keep hidden and each time my mouth felt like glue whenever I tried to talk about it It was a part of my life I had no control over and could never cure no matter how much I begged or pleaded I suppose that was why my parents had signed me up for the teen program They desired me to express my feelings rather than keeping them locked up It was in that moment with everyone in the room staring at me and waiting for me to say my name that I realized it was finally time to speak rather than escape my fearI felt the flush of heat strike my checks
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