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Reflection on Two Pieces of Art by Do Ho Suh

In this reflective essay, a student discusses two pieces by artist Do Ho Suh. The student considers their connections to Korean culture and society. She also shares some of her personal connections to the artwork.
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Angela's feedback:

"It's good that in talking about Suh's art you were able to include analysis on its intended meaning as well as the personal connections you made to the artwork. It would be helpful to the reader though if you provided brief descriptions of both pieces of art so that the reader can imagine what you're talking about. Naming the piece of artwork you're analyzing is also a standard aspect of introducing it to the reader. An edit is needed to work on your writing conventions, especially elements related to sentence structure. The second sentence of your first paragraph needs to be recast due to awkward phrasing, and run-on sentences such as the first sentence of your second paragraph should be reworded to improve the flow of your writing. There are also typos such as your use of "al" when you mean "all." Remember to capitalize the beginning of every sentence."

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