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Reflections of a Student in a Class About Teaching

This essay shares the reflections of a student during a week in class for primary school teachers.
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This essay received a C by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Christina's feedback:

"You did a great job ensuring your content reflected your understanding of the events that happened during the week. You did a very good job ensuring it was conveyed to the reader clearly, although there were some points that could have been fleshed out a bit more, regarding content. For instance, when craftsmanship is brought up, you could go into a bit of detail about what it is and why it’s important, ensuring the reader has a firm understanding of it. Regarding focus and purpose, you want to be sure the reader has a good understanding of the purpose of the paper. For instance, you could let the reader know you will be going through each individual day and sharing your reflections on them so the reader can have a better understanding of your experience. Regarding organization, let’s be sure the paragraphs are organized appropriately. When you start talking about Monday in the first paragraph, that could go into a separate paragraph with a transition. This will let the reader know you are moving into the meat of your paper. With formatting, you would find a lot of benefit reviewing the APA guidelines in reference to headings, page numbers, and title placement. Let’s also be sure that in a formal APA paper, you aren’t using all caps. I think you would benefit greatly from a round of proofreading to ensure any issues with spelling, punctuation, and grammar are resolved."

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