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Bob's feedback:
"You have a good idea of the strength of the relationships in the book, as well as Riva's character development. However, much of your essay circles around bigger ideas without getting into any specific analysis.
Your introduction is very repetitive and makes vague statements about love, hope, and relationships. While it's fine to make broad statements, you'll want to zero in on a more specific theme before you get into the body of your paper. Specifically, you'll want to connect these ideas to the book.
Make sure any quotes you use are relevant and worth quoting. For example, the quotation about Mama being a widow is just a factual statement that you could make on your own; it doesn't make sense to quote this directly.
Your conclusion starts to come together to give a better idea of your thesis; make sure it's present in your introduction as well.
It would be a good idea to work with an editor to address grammar issues, flow, clarity, sentence structure, and transitions."
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Kibin. (2024). Family, love, and support in ruth minsky sender's book, the cage. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/family-love-and-support-in-ruth-minsky-senders-book-the-cage-cJ5uPYjA
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