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Theres no vocabulary For love within a family love thats lived in But not looked at love within the light of which All else is seen the love within which All other love finds speech This love is silent TS Eliot Words not only affect us temporarily they change us they socialize or unsocialize us David Riesman Everyone has issues with their parents Thats just common knowledge Most people my age will tell you they hate their parents My mother is too protective My dads way too strict My mom says I should date My dad says Im worthless Not many people say that last one On the surface I have a great family and therefore a great life My mother and father have been happily married for twenty-one years I have a younger brother Robbie and also a younger sister Rachel And we have a dog I also have a huge extended family one grandfather two grandmothers seven uncles eight aunts and eleven cousins My parents both work My mother works as a supervisor of the mammography department of a hospital and my father works as a supervisor of a mechanical department of an aluminum plant Also my father sleeps during most of the day because he works the graveyard shift So if you take my family for surface value youd probably say that I have a great family But Im the one who lives here My father and I used to have a good relationship back when I was four I was Daddys little girl Hed take me camping in the back yard And Id wear his camouflage make-up And wed sleep under the stars I was his little soldier But something changed in him As I have become older my dads become less reasonable and more demanding Once I received straight As in school After that
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