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I glanced down to the barcode the tattooed my inner arm which started to burn the farther I strayed off from the thoughts the Superiors wanted me to think I looked up at the building that stood in front of me- its perfectly symmetrical white architecture of Providence hall Large cream colored stairs led to the grand doors which were completely desolate You only came here if they called you to come The windows were one way glass you never knew what happened on the inside The Superiors were our high class citizens who were in charge of us and everything around us They controlled everything that happened in the city walls sometimes even outside of them My great grandmother used to tell me stories stories before this civilization one where people didnt have barcodes that took over their life They didnt have the Superiors that knew every one of your inner thoughts They were free people who did what they wanted That society was different yes but it had its flaws and the punishments werent nearly as bad as they are here You didnt always feel safe there though She would tell me as a child stories of a society that had something called a government where people got to choose what they wanted to do with their life not just get assigned to a task The people started using their freedom in the wrong ways the planet started to overpopulate and the more people that came in the weaker the Earth got The air started to turn a grayish color the oceans started to pollute Those people were lazy Fae they didnt know how to care for the Earth People started to die because they couldnt handle what the atmosphere had come to loved ones friends family and even strangers But you felt sad for everyone Soon a man designed a new society and led it he called
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