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Report on the Physical Development of a Child

This paper reports on the physical development of a child based on published guidelines.
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Jim's feedback:

"Hello, I notice that your last sentence in the first paragraph has a plural subject and a singular verb. You should write "contribute." In the second paragraph, "Foremost" should not be capitalized, and you write "mad" instead of "made." In your third paragraph, you write "basketball ball," which is obviously redundant. That sentence has other issues. The semicolon should be deleted, and the entire list is confusing. The elements of a list should have the same form, so here you might write "playing basketball and catch-and-freeze, along with other ... ." We do not write "adulthood life." We write either "adulthood" or "adult life." Later, you say "she enjoy doing," and clearly "enjoy" should be "enjoys." You have the list issue again here. I would write "running around outside, from the bus stop, or with her dogs ... ." Your closing repeats much information. Especially in a rather short paper, I don't think it is necessary to write out the name of the checklist again."

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