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Research Proposal for Study on ADHD's Impact during Adolescence

This research proposal for an online survey describes the study's methods for collecting data on parenting teenagers with an ADHD diagnosis.
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"You demonstrate control of the form and information; the literature review is efficient, relevant, and purposeful, and the method and related discussions show clear professional knowledge. Overall, this is in a great place to focus next steps on polishing up and moving toward a final product. I question the rather conversational opening, but more importantly, I do spot a few errors in those first two sections that cause clarity issues ("It's a good start..." is unclear or contradictory, as is "otherwise age-appropriate"). This looks like a proofreading task, so make sure to catch occasional errors, including some punctuation issues and dropped words elsewhere. I see a few opportunities for style-oriented revision, such as enhancing sentence variety, as well."

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