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Fear Was the Main Reason for American Involvement in Vietnam War

In this argumentative essay, the student supports the claim that fear was the most important driving force behind the United States' involvement in Vietnam. The student cites the Red Scare and McCarthyism as the catalyst for the war.
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Bob's feedback:

"You make a strong point about fear being the driving factor behind the Vietnam War. You provide solid support for your argument and guide the reader toward your conclusion.

Historical figures like Joseph McCarthy should be introduced using their first and last name the first time you mention them.

Long quotations, such as the Tocqueville quote should be set aside using your style guide's rules to identify it as a quotation. As it stands, it appears to be part of the essay in your own words.

Historical events, unlike fictional events, should be described using the past tense.

There are a handful of errors that should be corrected such as "proceeding" vs "preceding." Make sure to proofread carefully."

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