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Insecurities I have usually been pretty satisfied with myself and I havent felt too insecure until one bright sunny summer day of my seventh grade year Everything turned around in a flash and to my surprise I didnt know the worst was yet to come Even though I knew that God had made me the way I was for a reason I had a hard time believing in myself I had liked this boy in my grade for a while but only from a distance He went to the Catholic school in Wells and I went to the public school in Wells Finally the last day of seventh grade had come and I was excited to be on summer break The best part about this day was the end of the school year party that I was going to that night When I got to my friend Ashleys house there were some other girls there too We were all just sitting around and talking and signing the yearbooks we had just recently gotten when a few boys rode up to Ashleys back yard on their bikes I was really excited because Trevor the boy I liked was out there All of my friends knew I liked him and they decided that they needed to talk to him Finally after a long talk and a lot of persuasion from the girls he agreed to date me I was so excited but really nervous I very rarely talked and he was the same way We were both too shy to say anything so my best friend always set up our dates Needless to say my boyfriend talked to my best friend more than he talked to me I didnt really think anything of it until that horrid day came when Trevor decided I wasnt the one for him anymore I got a call from him in the afternoon and we decided things werent right I was a
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