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Rose stared at the wall clock silently begging it to hit 330 330 was a gift 330 was the time all the students could leave Ms Bohls mind-numbing history class and finally go home Rose felt her concentration wavering as Ms Bohl recited her tedious lesson regarding World War IIBy this point numerous countries had joined forces with their allies to- Miss Dunn Eyes up hereRoses eyes jumped back to the teacher but once again she was sidetracked This time it was a taciturn giggling coming from the back of the classroom Rose turned around and fixed her eyes on Sarah Kao batting her eyelashes at the boy sitting adjacent to herI swear Rose thought If Sarah tries any harder with the boysSarah flipped her glossy black hair and smiled Rose rolled her eyes Sarah surveying the room caught Rose staring and shot daggers with her immense green eyes Rose whipped around so swiftly that her long blonde curls hit her in the faceMiss Dunn Miss Kao History class is not time for little girl fights Pay attention or Ill give you both detentionSnickers erupted from the group of students as they registered Ms Bohls ill-timed rhymeStudents Ms Bohl scolded What was I saying Oh yes Germany was regarded as one of the most authoritative and intimidating countries prior to the war Other nations-Brrrring Brrrring Brrrring BrrrringThe school bell rang and in a split second every student was heading for the doorTuesday April 11th 213525 Autumn Way356 PMDad Mom Im homeRose threw her heavy backpack against the russet armchair in the family roomDadRose groaned Her parents had an inclination to prefer working in their vocations to paying attention to their single daughterRose walked over to the wooden flight of stairs snaking down to the cold musty basementHelloIm down here RoseRose hearing her fathers voice descended the staircase and walked through the narrow hallway leading to his office She opened the door and saw her father
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