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Safety for All: Why Gun Control in America is Unconstitutional

In this essay, the student examines gun rights in America. They argue that gun control violates human rights and is unconstitutional, and offer alternative options to controlling gun-related violence.
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MJ's feedback:

"Your essay is off to a good start -- well-organized, with a clear thesis, consistent argument, and supporting sources. There are some problems with grammar, punctuation, typos, and general word choice, however; for example, in your first paragraph, you write "citizen" when it should be "citizens." A round of editing to help correct these issues would be beneficial. Citations are also an area of concern; in an academic paper, all sentences that contain information from a source, whether directly quoted or only paraphrased, need to include an accompanying in-text citation. Currently, many of the claims you make have not been referenced at all. To use your first paragraph as an example again, the second sentence notes the details of an attempted firearm ban, but you have not cited where this information is from. Be sure to review your essay and add citations liberally to avoid any suspicion of plagiarism."

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