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Saving Planet Earth One Person at a Time

This essay gives information regarding the planet and changes that can be made in order to assist with finding eco-friendly alternatives.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Christina's feedback:

"You had great content for the reader, ensuring they fully understood all the points you were making within the paper. You had an introduction that hooked the reader and a strong conclusion, but you want to be sure you are using good transitions from one paragraph to the next. For instance, from the second to the third paragraph, in the third paragraph, you could say, "Not only do we want to lower the amount of gasses used, but carbon dioxide is something else people need to focus on reducing." In this case, you are taking something spoken about in the last paragraph and implementing it into the next one, creating a smooth transition from one subject to the next. Regarding your format, let's review your style guide for MLA format to ensure all of your in-text citations are correct. You would also benefit from a good round of proofreading so any issues with word choice and punctuation are resolved before you submit your work."

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