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Shipwrecked I awoke there was a crash on the upper deck I heard a thunderous crackling from my head above I ran up the stairs and what I saw devastated me The small wooden boat was completely coated in billowy flames Help help somebody please someone had cried I slowly moved towards the sound being careful to dodge flames as much as possible The smoke was choking me I could see a faint outline of a face across the deck It was Tom my lifelong friend and companion He was completely surrounded by the bright flames Tom are you OK I yelled Yeah but the fire has me surrounded Tom yelled Tom jump overboard hurry Butbut Do it quick hurry As Tom jumped so did I I hit the surprisingly cold water with a crash and swam through the sea illuminated by the flames to find Tom You okay buddy Yeah the flames were everywhere and I wasnt sure what to do Well you did the right thing Tom Finally he was beside me riding over the waves We found a large board that supported our weight and we began to circle the destroyed vessel I began to feel weary from inhaling so much smoke Everything was going dark and before long I couldnt hold on I dont know when I woke up All I could feel was rugged sand all over my body and in my mouth Land we had washed ashore Then I remembered fully what had happened last night I began to look for Tom Tom Tom Where are you There was no sign of him anywhere Then I saw the footprints in the sand and I instantly knew they were his because I had never seen a bigger pair of feet in my life They were going towards the lofty trees ahead of me that lined the boundary of the seaside I followed them to see him lying against an
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