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It was so fun I hit the water I screamed I cried I kicked I felt a bump I hit the bottom I screamed Nothing just bubbles My head started swimming I started seeing black I opened my mouth I just got water I woke up coughing and spurting water out of my mouth This was my first experience with pools I was at Jonathan Kutasov and Jacob Mazzerellas kindergarten birthday In first grade I said Mommy Mommy COME I want to leave Lab I dont want to go swimming and in 3rd grade we have swimming in gym Can I switch to Ray PleaseBenji that is silly You are not going to leave Lab You will eventually learn how to swim my mom saidThat same year I took a swimming class because I was afraid of the water and I knew I needed to learn how to swim eventually So I took a class at Ratner Gym I was mover up from the very elementary group to the beginner group mostly because of my age The kids in the very elementary class were much younger than I was The instructor told me to jump in but I was afraid of the water so I said NO The instructor then tried to encourage me to go in the water I would not do it So the instructor took the issue to my mom My mom asked me if I want to do it and I said NO She tried to convince me but she saw how scared I was so she let me be And that was the end of that swimming classThe next year my mom asked me if I wanted to Adventure Kids Camp at Lab that summer The camp had field trips every Tuesday and Thursday BUT the camp also included swimming every day which my mom didnt tell me aboutso I said yes because it sounded fun Once the time came
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