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Pretend you smoke and you have a young child This could hurt you in many ways These are the ways that smoking can hurt you Smoking is bad for your health smoking is bad for children and smoking costs a great deal of money There should be a law banning smoking There are some reasons that smoking is bad for your health You could get liver cancer you could get lung cancer and you could get other and more serious kinds of cancer You could stop breathing anywhere Also you could just die and you dont want that to happen to you When people smoke around children it hurts them in many ways One way it hurts children is that if children see adults smoking they will think it is fine for them to smoke Another way smoking is bad for children is a thing that is just as bad as smoking It is called second hand smoking Second hand smoking is when you breath in the same fumes as the smokers Smoking costs a great deal of money Cigarettes cost five dollars a packet It costs 35 dollars per week if you smoke a packet a day It costs 140 dollars per month It costs 1680 dollars per year Also if you smoke a packet a day for 50 years that would cost you 84000 dollars Think of how much money you would save if you didnt smoke I support this law because my grandfather is dying because he smoked so much Also I really dont want other people to go through what I have been through I really hope my idea will become a law Personally I think that it would save a lot of lives
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