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Kibin. (2023). Snails from scratch: boil and fry. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/snails-from-scratch-boil-and-fry-HQtR70sJ
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"Well done ensuring your main focus was told to the reader in the first paragraph. You were very clear in letting them know you would be writing about the steps for cooking fresh snails. You also did a great job ensuring your content was accurate, and you communicated it well. The following are a few things you can do to ensure your paper is fully ready for submission. Regarding organization, you want to be sure your conclusion is fully detailed, ensuring the reader knows what they should be taking away from your essay. For instance, you could let the reader know what foods they could eat the snail with or any other closing details to give the reader a feeling of finality. When it comes to formatting, you want to make sure you are consistent throughout the entire document. Everything would need to be double spaced, for instance. Also, you want to be sure your last name and page number are written on the top, right-hand side of a document with MLA formatting. Regarding conventions, such as punctuation, your paper could benefit from a minor round of proofreading to ensure your document is ready to be submitted."
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Kibin. (2023). Snails from scratch: boil and fry. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/snails-from-scratch-boil-and-fry-HQtR70sJ
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