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SO YOUNG SO ADDICTED Justin Mackenzie has been smoking since the age of 10 till now hes 15 Every single person in his family has lung illnesses caused by smoking and he knows all that But why is he still smoking Lolita Lee talks to him about that and a whole lot more First give us a brief history of Justin Mackenzie Where do you get cigarettes When I was ten I used to take it from my friends they never told me where they get it But now I buy it anywhere I was born in Sydney and moved to Brisbane when I was six I dont have any brothers or sisters but I have the best parents in the world I went to Corpora Primary School and was a sport person and the school captain in grade seven And now here I am in Tangalish High School Many people included Corpora Primary School students used to call you sporty why Smiling Its because I was very good at sports especially athletics which I used to come first second or third Are you still good at sports No I dont play sports any more Why Well since I started smoking I became very slow I cant run for 50m without stopping for a rest I thought it would be better to stop How did you start smoking When I was 10 I used to walk with a group of friends but they dumped me because I dont want to share my lunch with them So I started walking with another group which were all smokers They often asked me if I want a cigarette but I kept saying No smoking causes death and they use to laugh and say Are you scared about that-chicken Hardly anyone ever asks me for ID Maybe I look eighteen How did your parents react when they
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