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Social Media's Beauty Standards Cause Physical and Mental Harm

This essay discusses how social media perpetuates body image issues. The student notes that beauty standards are heavily promoted and these standards can affect the mental and physical health of young people.
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Bob's feedback:

"This is a solid paper that explores a sensitive topic thoughtfully and seriously. Your intro builds up to your thesis statment well, each paragraph stays on topic, and you provide good support for your claims.

There are a handful of sentences that could be reworked for clarity. For example, there is a sentence fragment in your second paragraph, and the first sentence of that same paragraph can be confusing. Make sure to proofread thoroughly and consider having an editor go over your paper to iron out these issues."

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