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Societal Expectations: To Conform or Defy

This is an overview of how an individual can make changes within society as a whole.
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"Overall, I think you did a great job introducing and transitioning into your quotes within the work. They gave validity to your paper, and that is what strengthens your points. Regarding focus/purpose, and even content, you want to be sure you are adding an introduction and conclusion into your paper. The introduction will let the reader know what you are wanting to convey. Are you trying to give advice? Are you telling a story that has a moral message? Overall, you want to ensure the reader gets a preview of what they will be reading within the body of your paper. The conclusion is an overview of what you talked about, and it allows you to stress what you would like the reader to take away from your writing. With formatting, I would like you to review your MLA handbook or the website for any guidance on the works cited page and how to format the name and page numbers on the top, right hand corner. Regarding conventions, I would recommend a really good round of proofreading to ensure the work is free of any grammar and punctuation errors."

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