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"There is a whole lot of interesting and useful information packed into this essay. However, the large number of topics can actually detract from the paper. It's difficult for your reader to get a grasp on any of the theories you mention. You might consider focusing on fewer theories and instead go into a little more depth on the ones you keep in.
It's not necessary to keep each discipline to its own paragraph. It would be much easier for your reader if you were to start a new paragraph each time you begin discussing a different social scientist.
The idea that these three disciplines interact to give a better picture of humanity is an interesting one and should be explored more thoroughly, rather than just asserted in your intro and conclusion.
Be sure to proofread as there are a number of awkward sentences and difficult transitions."
Kibin. (2023). Sociology, anthropology, and psychology give us a deeper understanding of humanity. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/sociology-anthropology-and-psychology-give-us-a-deeper-understanding-of-humanity-OWrYHBrm
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("Sociology, Anthropology, and Psychology Give Us a Deeper Understanding of Humanity.")
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