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As a Marian girl my life revolves around four things God friendsfamily and food So what happens when the school that I love keeps mefrom getting the food I crave before the dreaded bell rings Lets justsay it doesnt go well for my afternoon teachers The lunch lines atMarian are so long that a student at the end of the line does not getadequate time to finish their lunch by the time they sit down to eatThis pressing issue must be addressed immediately I think Marian can improve its serious lunch line issue by having athird line out in the Quad for senior use only With three lunch linesthe problematic line will be no more Since the senior class exercisetheir rightfully earned seniority privileges to the fullest extent andcut to the front of the lunch line the loan freshman in the back of theline will not finish her third breadstick by the time lunch is overThree lunch lines will allow faster moving lines and therefore resultin full eating time for all who crave those delicious school lunches So not only will a third lunch line fix the problem of too short ofeating times at lunch it will also help myself and my afternoonteacher have a better daySalerno 1
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