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"This is a clearly written and well-organized paper. Going step-by-step using details and a direct, succinct tone ensures the reader follows the discussion at all times. There is good use of a signal phrase in the first paragraph ("according to..."); however, similar reference to sources appear nowhere else in the discussion. In their absence, the reader can't get a sense of what research is behind these claims, which can be especially problematic when giving advice. This problem is reflected in the final sentence: "everyone can cure insomnia." This is no small claim, and by this point, the reader may balk. If this is indeed true, make sure to responsibly and rigorously provide sourcing, whether using in-text citations or signal phrases (as in your first paragraph) if your assignment details preclude citations. This will ensure the reader not only follows your discussion, which is clearly presented, but is also persuaded."
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