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Stay in Your Lane: How the Phrase has Change Meaning in My Life

This reflective essay provides information about the writer's first car accident. The author discusses how the accident changed their view of how they should behave behind the wheel, how they should look at life, and how to identify toxic relationships.
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Christina's feedback:

"You did well letting the audience know about your accident and how it changed your view of how you should behave behind the wheel and how to identify toxic relationships. I think you do a great job transitioning the "stay in your lane" hook idea into your car accident, and you provide a solid amount of reflection at the end of the short essay. The paragraph about the accident itself could be broken up into smaller paragraphs to help with flow and readability. Remember that you can use multiple paragraphs to talk about one event within an essay, which will ultimately help your reader follow your logic and narrative."

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