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Sticking to Your Beliefs as an Individual

This is a reflective essay in which the author talks about their path to finding their own religion. The author discussed the challenges of having parents that made them attend church, the questioning of their faith, and the process they went through to find their own spiritual path. The author also discusses the importance of thinking for oneself and believing what one wants rather than believing what others feel they should.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have created a great essay that is relatable because of your ability to share your personal experience in detail. For the most part, at the paragraph and sentence level, you have created smooth transitions between your ideas, allowing for an ease in readability. There are a few exceptions to this. The most noticeable exception is the discrepancy between talking about "On that Sunday..." and "In the meantime...". I would consider a part to your introduction that lets the reader know why they are reading about your life experience. You have made the goal of the essay clear in the conclusion but not in the introduction. There are a significant number of grammar and sentence structure errors throughout the essay that are detracting from the story. These can be resolved with a thorough round of proofreading. You have ended a paper with a well-rounded conclusion that identifies why you wrote about what you did and helps the reader further relate. "

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