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A Strategic Analysis of the Lego Corporation

This informative paper gives information on Legos, such as the structure of the company, marketing, and economics.
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Christina's feedback:

"Within your introduction, you did a very good job at ensuring the reader knows what's ahead. The content was developed well, and you conveyed wonderful ideas and reasoning for the points you made. You also did a fantastic job integrating the sources into your paper. The following are some areas to build strength in order to ensure your paper is polished and ready for submittal. With organization, let's make the opening more eye-catching. You could give a short blurb or something to show a child's interest in legos, letting the reader reminisce about a time when they played with them as a child. It will draw them in and help them feel more invested in what you wrote. When it comes to formatting, let's review your APA guidelines for assistance with things like the running head, the title and page number at the top of each page, your in-text citations, and your reference page (along with the format of books and articles you used). Regarding conventions, this paper could benefit from a round of proofreading to resolve any issues with punctuation, grammar, and spelling."

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