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Studying the Mind of a Serial Killer: A Research Essay

This research essay provides a better understanding of the minds of serial killers, showing the commonalities between their brains to give a better idea of why they have an imbalance in control and judgment.
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Christina's feedback:

"Great overview of the minds of serial killers and showing the commonalities between their brains to give a better idea of why they have an imbalance in control and judgment. Ideally, your introduction should include a clear focus statement, letting the reader understand the purpose of your paper. While your title and second paragraph indicate that you'll be focusing on the minds and specific psychological and neurological profiles of serial killers, your introduction does not yet make this clear, so the organization of your paper feels a bit scattered and less focused than it could be.

In addition to helping you clarify your focus, a solid round of editing will help to ensure the issues with punctuation, sentence fragments, sentence structure, and word usage are resolved before submitting your work."

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