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Madeline Schmidt I only recently became aware of this girl when I was assigned to sit next to her in class She appears to be extremely intelligent and self aware Shes very talkative when allowed in class but is usually resigned to two male friends in particular I noticed crisscrossed patterns of thin scars on both her forearms as well as her upper thighs They are obviously self mutilation scars although fairly healed indicating that some time has passed since she last self-harmed Due to this observation I conclude that at one point she suffered from depression I have overheard her in conversation with one of her male friends discussing her new medication for her manic depression Aka Bipolar Disorder This supports my theory as to her condition and what could be the causation for her self-harm On the side of her head is a patch of new growth hair most likely caused by the shaving of that spot My first thought was that she had undergone some type of brain operation requiring the shave however I observed that one of her male friends that is seated across the room has half of his head shaved This seems to be a trending hair style to shave a partial section of hair on ones head This brings me to believe that Madeline is edgy and brave not afraid to try new things on the cusp of mainstreamDuring a passing period one day I followed her for quite some time trying to see what she was like outside of class I came to see that she is very reserved and flustered to be surrounded by so many people Looking as if she was being
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