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We find that some who drop out of college like Steve Jobs or Bill Gates create multi-billion dollar companies They developed their own skills through independence and controlnot relying on school systems to teach them life skills Although one could claim that schools should focus more on supporting conformity because of the idea that individuals must learn in a setting in which individuals needs are subordinated in to group interest Source D schools must focus more on individualism in order to promote independent thinking and let the students control their own lives in order for the students to succeed and progress in lifeSince I was a young child I was undisciplined unable to focus and distracted at the slightest sound or movement and rude debasing and patronizing others for having different thoughts But as I grew older as I attended school I learned to concentrate and see from other points of view The rigid schedule and expectations of school caused me to develop self-control and thought only with the help of school did I mature and learn to respect the opinions and privacy of othersAlthough school teaches students like me to respect others and fit in with society schools must keep in mind success as synonymous with schooling isnt true in either an intellectual or a financial sense Source A Rather schools must think of themselves as institutions that protected childrens rights to some schooling Source E Ultimately the students are left to teach themselves in order to conform to society and progress through life They must be given space for their own private thoughts they must be left figure out their own path not a path set for them by schools Because plenty of people throughout the world today find a way to educate themselves without resorting to a system of compulsory secondary schools Source A the schools roles are to guide students on how to think independently and pursue their own interests
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