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Her long brown hair whips in the wind as she gallops off on Annabelle Of course knowing Daisy Lynn the waves on each strand of hair is done perfectly She is the most flawless person I have ever met and definitely the picture perfect girl at Tullahoma High School I have known her ever since the third grade I could just stare at her forever wait that sounds a little creepy I just have this really big crush on her and always have Daisy Landers oh how that name flows so beautifully Cmon Greyson shake out of it She probably has never even thought about me before Or even heard my name other than when the teacher calls it out for attendance in chemistryI am at her house watching her teach my little sister Kimmy how to horseback ride We make eye contact from a distance and it feels as if time stops but she quickly looks at Kimmy trying to steer away from the awkwardnessDaisy What time does your lesson get over Stacey McKinstry Daisys mom shouts in a nasty toneI still have twenty six minutes left Why Daisys sweet soft voice squeaks outI need help with the dishes the laundry and picking up the mess you always leave with the horse equipment and never care to clean up and I need help NOW Mrs McKinstry screamed back at DaisyBut mothe--Daisy is interrupted by her witch of a mother I said now you bratDaisy seems shook up and frantic not knowing what to do I want to help her out Should I get Kimmy and leave Should I go help Mrs McKinstry with the chores Or should I try to calm down Daisy I start jogging up to where Daisy and Kimmy are sitting on their horses Annabelle and RockyShe starts to stutter Well uhh yeah
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